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Demon Wars

Published: Mar 13, 2006

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Yep here it is my new comic.
I was pleased with the layout and genreal drawings but the more shading i put into it the more confusing and difficult to see it became. I was very disapointed in how the rain turned out (yes that is s'posed to be rain) but a bit more pratice is needed i guess
I tryed to be a little more descriptive with the narrative (maybe as i'd been reading Sin City latley)
I think its only going to be a short comic as i do want to constantrait on Paradise Lost (my other comic) but i really wanted to do something with this charactor so here it is
By the way he's still unnamed so give a hero a name today and win a smile off me

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vermithrax40

Jan 1, 2010

Again nice pencils! if u had a hard time with the rain, i suggest using a ruler and the thinnest pencil lead u can find. Draw them at the same angle, but break the lines at intervals as you go. The thin lines won't take away from your pic.

your rain lines are a little thick, which draws (unconciously)(did i spell that right?)the reader's eye to them. so they kinda blend in with the arrows a little. But i have to say, I liked the arrows, nice touch.

just an opinion, a way as opposed to the way. Hope it helps!